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Piles of leaves everywhere.
Kids playing in the piles of leaves.
Wind blowing the piles over.
Leaves falling from the tall trees.
The sun making the leaves crisp.
WALT: observe and include specific details in our writing
Includes four nouns (from observation)
Made the nouns do something
Started each new description on a new line
Extended each line so it makes more sense
(may include a who, where, why, what, when).