Friday, 28 June 2013

Camp Reflection

Reflection for Camp

My goal for camp was to conquer the big hill and keep up with Mr M.

I achieved this because I used the force and had Determination.

Something I was pleased with was I had a lot of fun and learnt about the class more.
Because everybody wasn't afraid to be themselves.
I really enjoyed learning how much I can push myself to my limit.
Because pushing yourself can be much more fun than you think.
Something I found hard was walking up the pipeline.
Something that made me think was the amazing race.
Because my team chose the thinking quiz.
· My top 5 favourite things about camp were:

Favourite Things
Reason Why
1. Confidence course.
I pushed myself.
2. Caving.
It was an amazing experience.
3. Learning the class.
I didn't know much about the class before.
4.Rock hopping.
I had a lot of fun with Mr M.
5.The whole experience.
There was rain but that wasn't anything to stop my class, not at all.

Friday, 14 June 2013

Rock Hopping

WALT choose words that describe a moment (in an exciting way) for the reader
  • begins in the action
  • present tense (I am, not I was)
  • short, sharp sentences
  • strong verbs
  • uses the senses (look, feel, hear, taste, smell)
  • language features (simile, alliteration, onomatopoeia, metaphor)
  • show personality (sounds like you, humour, feelings, exaggeration)

Rock Hopping

Are we really going to do this 0b1? Just use the force Zeb. Use the force.
Well ok, Force jump... Am I dead? Well open your eyes then! I made it! Ok the next rock. Yea! And again Zeb. Well, I don’t get that when I’m out here doing this, you're in my head telling me to use the force. But really that is pretty easy. Don’t forget I’m eating pie. Well then shut ya piehole, you're making me hungry. Ok What did I say? You said SHH... Ok... Good now I can make the jumps now without my conscience bugging me. BUTT :) SHUT YA PIEHOLE! Oh great just great. Is it Yoda?... NO!... It’s a big rock thingy that I have to run up. Use the force Zeb.  I don’t even care anymore. Up up up up up. Oh, One more time. Up up up up up. Yes, I’m up. Woohoo! I feel like I’m on Mount Everest! But you're not. I hope you have a biiig sleep in tomorrow. Well in that case, I will set my alarm a 7.ooam I made a new song in my head. It’s called You Make Me Rage! Man, this is fun. But the one thing that isn't fun is you 0b1. I’m glad to be of your help Zeb. Hey look over there it’s a hut and look there, It’s a cave with a small opening. I’m going in. Yaaa! Hey look there was a bigger opening! Well bad luck. ding. Yay my pie is ready. Stop making pie in my head!

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